Dear iphone,
iphone, oh my iphone,
I love you,
You help me with everything that I do.
You are very useful for everything I do.
You help me get information.
You help me play games.
You help me release my stress.
You help me use your wonderful features.
iphone, you are beautiful and thin.
iphone, oh my iphone,
Your intellectual ability is sharp as a shark's fin.
Writing a note when urgent
Finding a place when hungry
Calculating a problem when annoyed
Mailing a message when worried.
Ode to my iphone.
Ode to my dear smart phone.
Ode to my sincere friend.
Ode to my love, iphone
Your favorite, Jin Hyeong Park (Edward Park)
Jinhyeong,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good ode but you should try using more personifications to make it more poetic. Give human qualities to your iphone.
Hi!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your ode to your iphone. You have to try to use more descriptive language in your ode. Keep working hard~
-Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)
I want to have iphone too. I heard that it is very beautiful.
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